【Hatsune Miku V3 English】The Empty World

This is my original song. I would gladly appreciate any feedback from you.You can find better quality here: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mHE_eLk55bULyric:I dont know how long I've been here I dont know what place it is At these endless empty ruins I've been trying to find someone From my past I can remember Many faces, songs and light I was happy to sing for people With my best friends all the night Now all this is gone forever Only ashes in the sky This cold empty world is dying My time is running out too But anyway I will continue Searching there for someone I just want to be heard In the end of my life

http://www.nicovideo.jp/watch/sm22314161